Saturday, November 7, 2009

Pantoum...
My poetic son wrote a few pantoums recently
and I wanted to share some with my Poetry Cafe.
It's a form of poetry that repeats a whole line rather than words.
The second and fourth lines of the first stanza are used again and
repeated exactly to become the first and third lines of the second
stanza. The same pattern is used to complete the entire poem.
They can be as long as you'd like, but most are about four stanzas.

Here's my example:


Appears from the past
The boyish man
To break the fast
Once again

The boyish man
That you once fed
Beckons again
for soul's bread

That you once fed
Until weakness set in
for soul's bread
He has come again

Until weakness set in
You always forget.
He has come again.
He's not full yet.





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